MrKaktus81's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[2 Days Late to Pico Day]

The shading choice is kinda wack, and overall I don't understand the theme of this image? I don't know why pico would be standing within a plume of smoke. I think if you research some stuff, like shading basic shapes, you would improve very fast! (Happy late Pico Day, by the way)

aRandomIdiot responds:

I was trying to draw the giant broken wall from the end of Pico's School but I did not really make the edges of it look flat like in the game, sorry.

[OBJECTION!!]

Nice. But maybe make the coloured outlines a wee bit darker? It's really hard to distinguish them from the colour sometimes. And I do think the composition is kinda wack, you should move the tail of the left character to the right so then it's easier to center them. But this is very nice overall

[clem redesign]

Very nice! But do try to maybe use a drawing app that supports Vectors? So you could avoid all that blurry-ness

sonicboi66612 responds:

well uh thanks I don't know why krita (my art program) is doing this, it wasn't like this before

[Jhonachub joestar]

Never invite his dog over to a Barbecue... things will not be so... Smokin'...

[Dingodille in the fnf style]

Love me some Dingodile content! You pulled off the style very well! One thing I might nitpick is the pose is sorta boring, but he is just standing before doing any crazy arrow poses, so that's reasonable!

Elbeardo69 responds:

yeah I do agree I could have made a more interesting pose but this was my first time drawing in the FNF style, so I didn't want to try a crazy pose. but even in my drawing of the red knight i did try a new pose but i feel it fits them more. but i'm working on a new character that I think has a better pose that fits the character

[My drawing for Pico day 2021]

Well actually Pico Day is on May 1st, but still, this looks very cool!

[GF]

Nice

[Hippie Mario]

Very nice! Reminds me of how old Newgrounds games would use that rainbow gradient

[hello newgroundz]

Well it looks stylistically pleasing enough, so there's nothing wrong with that. buuuuut if I was a big stinky nitpicker I would say that Hank's jaw in this outfit should've been all bandaged up on the count of it being ripped off and all... but still this is a very good piece! Welcome to Newgrounds!

[Game Concept]

Very nice colours choice on this! Just maybe add some more darker coloured bricks on the brick tile set, it would look slightly nicer

superblueguy responds:

thank you. i can try that. glad you like it!